Falling

20.07.2013 г., 12:27 ч.

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I can't stop fall, betrayed from my mind.

I'm trying hard with my all, not to be blind.

I'm tired to feel like this - so fooled, so lost.

I know there's something I miss,

but sometimes you gotta get crossed.

They say that people don't ever change,

but I know they've sold their souls on the stock exchange.

So I won't hide anymore behind the tears of the clown

when the world is full of pain and there's no sound.

Моля, влезте с профила си, за да може да коментирате и гласувате.

konstantbulgara (Констант Булгара)

2013-07-20T17:19:37+03:00

Hi try to write in Bulgarian.May be you have an extraordinary feeling about the world , however i think that only in your native language , you will be able to express all your thoughts.Further our language is so beautiful.
kind regards
Tomad (Тома Кашмирски)

2013-07-20T12:28:38+03:00

Съветвам Ви да се запознаете с малко повече английска лирика преди да пишете. Принципно те държат на по-други форми, не за друго. А, да, betrayal (noun) - betray (verb).