Oct 18, 2015, 8:32 AM

Благодат 

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                                                                             да бъдеш
                                                                                 млад
                                                                                     е

                                                                              благодат

 

                                                                                   очѝ
                                                                             отворени
                                                                          и ококорени

 

                                                                                 сърце
                                                                разтупкващо вселените
                                                                    в което чувстват се
                                                                             спасени те

 

                                                                                  душа
                                                                               възчиста
                                                                          неподправена
                                                        към добротворство направлявана

 

                                                                            и вярваш си
                                                                                че твой

                                                                                светà е
                                                                    

                                                                    та ти си просто млад
                                                                                  това е

 

.                                               ........................................................................

 

                                                                            и вярваш си
                                                                                че твой
                                                                                светът е

 

                                                                              ти просто
                                                                                млад си
                                                                                млад си
                                                                                  млад

 

                                                                                  и тъй
                                                                                да бъде

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  • Благодаря,
    ljubomira(Любомира), AdelaideKaltenberg(Тони),
    tanq_mezeva(Таня Мезева),Andromaha(Белла), vega666(Младен Мисана)!

    пролетни цветя
    е младостта и святост
    е на любовта
  • Да, младостта е една ефимерна, но красива илюзия. Добре е, че ни припомняш това, Стояне. Спомням си как веднъж, преди много години, водихме разговор с покойния преводач на поезия и културтрегер, Владимир Свинтила. Тогава му казах, че пиша нелоша поезия, но имам един съществен недостатък - млад съм и това пречи на редакторите да възприемат сериозно написаното от мен. Няма да забравя как той бащински ми се усмихна и каза: Не се безпокой - това е поправим недостатък /имаше предвид младостта ми/.

    Поздравление за творбата!
  • Да! Поне душата нека бъде!
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